Krupp

Right, i've been gone for a long while, but I finally have the next part set up and ready to go for reading.

Well this may not be a great help, but I think there's a common fear of infodumping. I'm not saying it's ok to infodump all the time, but look at ...

Dangit, somebody beat me to making a list...but a nice one it is, Napal. I'd only throw a few more names in there: Mark Z. Danielewski (Thriller/Horror/Epic) Charles Bukowski's novel ...

Finished it today. Fun to read, as your work is always, Napal. In particular I'm down with you writing sci-fi kinds of stuff; it's ballin, so to speak. I love ...

Sorry dude; i've been away for a long while. I'll get around to reading this and get back to you asap.

Honestly, if you want slang, read Infinite Jest by David Foster Wallace. Plenty of slang examples in there.

Sounds like complete crock to me. I wouldn't bother using that site anymore, dude. Getting everyone to 'back' you so that you can get noticed is not what writing's about, ...

This dude is the essence of manliness.

As far as humor goes, this was definitely entertaining. It had me chuckling throughout. Pretty much everyting Napalmerski has said, I'm inclined to agree with. It also kinda reminds me ...

I must say this is one of your more adventurous works. When I say that I mean obviously, it's romantic beyond just being a boy and girl in love; the ...

Thanks mate. My apologies for not getting back to you on your new work. I'll be sure to finish reading it tonight and get back to you.

Man you're making me look bad. I'm still stuck on the one thing I've been working on since late 2009 hahaha

I'll get along to this right away.

All right, here's the next part: viewpoints 6-9, setting the stage for a little bit more of characterization, relationships, and things of that nature. These next few viewpoints have me ...

I say you stick with whatever you feel will draw more interest. If it means italics, go for it. If it means using these: go for it. If it means ...