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Yes, more or less, thats what.\ :)

Anything, really. i usually like fantasy stories, write about people in pain, rp romances. that stuff.

Anyone in need of a writing partner? I'm very active, but, have only 68 points as of right know. I will probably have enough by tomorrow. I would donate points ...

But... your haven't come lately, typo. :) it's you, not your. or you're. lol, it was a good poem, though!

Thanks! All this will help with the novel i'm writing outside young writers society. One day, you might see it on the shelves. It's called "The Rider." no more deats, ...

Thanks! any more critiques?

Thankyou for all the critiques! The only thing is, i don't think i can make this chapter longer, only because the following scene is in chapter two. I'll keep in ...

I almost leaped out of the chair at his reaction. "Who?!" i said sheepishly. "Where are they?!?!" he yelled, and jumped at me. I leaped out of the chair, and, ...

thanks! i already have a novel i posted it already, it's called the Survivor. Thanks! any other suggestions? just need to know how to add another chapter on my novel! ...

i'm new, and have one question that if you answer you will be my SAVIOR! *clears throat* how do you add another chapter to your story?

but their parents had put together two large wooden boxes together colored words= used the word "together" to many times. Try and use it one time.

We decided to check the gym, since that’s what lesson the boys had, had . When we arrived, we saw four boys just stood there looking totally clueless (like they ...

But, I'm getting ahead of myself, this isnt the begining , ohno! Blue: Spelling mistake- isn't Green: Another spelling mistake- beginning Red: Grammar mistake- should be 'oh no!' hope that ...

I love it! The battle sequence was my favorite part of the chapter. I love the whole concept, though. I can't wait for more!

I love it. Can't wait to see more of your poems!