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Good. She's gone. [font=american typewriter] She looked around the room, her streaked hair swishing with her. She didn't know many people here- well, she didn't know anybody at all.[/font=american typ

I flinched, my instincts grabbing my sword. Morrak growled back, obviously going into protector mode. This was so boring, she had better things to do in her home world, fighting ...

"Morrak." I whined as events unfolded before me. "It's nothing, Seria. Nothing at all." He crooned, sweeping his tail around my ankles. "They're-they're talking about being a-assassins." She trembled.

Oh wow, I'm gone for a few days and 38 comments already?! Thanks guys! I'll start to RP my character. :3 A sleek frame shadowed the entrance to the restaurant, ...

Here, you can take on the role of any character, whether it be from your story, or a book you've read, or a tv series! Say, maximum ride, or Percy ...

Seria walked in, with her wolf Morrak at her side. Her long, wavy blonde hair was highlighted with orange and red. She raised an eyebrow at the place. It was ...

It's a great story, though I wish it could've been a wee bit longer. :) It nice to read, though, and you did a great job.

Wow...Completely amazing. I loved it! It's flawless, and found myself wanting to kill the knights myself! A wonderful wonderful piece of work. I can't wait for chapter two!

“Nah, Mountain Lions don’t attack people, too afraid. Now attack horse, maybe.” Roy debated, and suddenly all their heads turned in unison the sound of hoof beats. That sentence had ...

Thankyou! I will fix those. And what did you mean by my ideas were used to death? All ideas originate off one another. You'll always find a little bit of ...

Ring! Ring! The electronic bell loudly rang over the overcome in my classroom. I quickly got up, unplugged my ipod, and gathered my books. I didn't want to be late ...

Thanks. I try to think what a teenager does, or what I would've done. :) I'm not a teenager. :P Thanks for the critique. :)

Part one. (Enjoy. :D) I plugged in my ipod, listening to my favorite song, Haunted, by Taylor Swift. Tonight was the football game. Great. I mean, don't get me wrong, ...

a punch from you is like a vase falling to the floor and breaking to a million pecies It looks like you had a spelling mistake. Also, i feel like ...

I though I could survive anything Red= typo. Is it supposed to be thought, or all though? make sure to revise that! :)