Krokee64

This is good, but I feel like it is the skeleton of a story, not the whole thing. I think you put too much time into thinking about what will ...

I love the concept and the writing is good. Just a few typos but that'll happen with a first draft. I really liked the creativity with the concept. The only ...

Godd writing, just a couple of suggestions. First of all, your a good writer but your idea isn't original at all. It's Xmen. If you would want to publish that ...