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Re: Clown in the dark
This is good, but I feel like it is the skeleton of a story, not the whole thing. I think you put too much time into thinking about what will ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: Thirty Three Days Chapter 1
I love the concept and the writing is good. Just a few typos but that'll happen with a first draft. I really liked the creativity with the concept. The only ...
Jul 5, 2011 -
Re: The X-Men: Revolution Era, Chapter One
Godd writing, just a couple of suggestions. First of all, your a good writer but your idea isn't original at all. It's Xmen. If you would want to publish that ...
Jul 5, 2011