Kriege404

Thanks so much! I'm really glad you liked it, and I totally agree I love when writers give unusual objects the chance to tell the story. The part about being ...

Thanks so much! I'm really glad you liked it. Did you find any specific tense problems? I'm trying my best to go through and fix them all :)

I was on a school computer when I replied and have no idea why it posted this four times...sorry if you got four notifications!

Thank you so much! I went back through and tried to fix some of the tense changes, I noticed that a lot when I was reading it too. Part of ...

Thank you so much! I wanted to it be misleading in spots because I didn't want the reader to know he was a book, but I'll try to make sure ...

Thank you so much! I wanted to it be misleading in spots because I didn't want the reader to know he was a book, but I'll try to make sure ...

Thank you so much! I wanted to it be misleading in spots because I didn't want the reader to know he was a book, but I'll try to make sure ...

Thank you so much! I wanted to it be misleading in spots because I didn't want the reader to know he was a book, but I'll try to make sure ...