Kraemer

Puishment Divine-Blind Guardian (as well as their whole discography.;P) Best BAND EVER!!!!!!! If you never heard them, try Turn the Page, Fly, Lionheart, and Otherland. These are the easiest to ...

Anything and everything from rock, to punk to jazz to speed metal to power metal. (a really good band to check out is Blind guardian. They opened my eyes to ...

There is no gods, when you die, you die. There are no gods; when you die, you die Although I agree that your tense is wrong here, it seems by ...

[pre]I am Kraeman, I'm 16....... I drum a lot. Hours a day. It's what I'm good at. I play a little bit of guitar. Not all that good, but I ...

You're a big fan of GRRM aren't you. First your identity, then the whole telling Cassandra about the intrigue needed to get support from the nobles Also, why are frowning ...

I am just finishing A Clash of Kings by George R.R. Martin It is the second book in his amazing fantasy series A Song of Ice and Fire Then on ...

all ready rated yours 9/10 I got a new one

ooh and sorry for delving into psychology and philosophy. I am such a nerd

I hate to say it but you "fear you're becoming normal" we are all normal.... anyone who thinks otherwise is sort of kidding themselves. Sure we are all slightly different ...

Drink yourself drunk with my ale. It seems that the drink yourself drunk is unneccessary. Just share my ale, or quench your thirst or soemething would suffice. Most people, even ...

love the sayings. The second especially 9/10

Not knowing whether not you’re okay. I'm being picky here, but I think it should be whether or not you're okay. It seems to me that you are trying a ...

not bad. actually it reminded me of an Angels and Airwaves song. I found the first bit before the chorus better. Afer, it seems you're trying too hard to rhyme ...

one thing i found odd was CHAPTER 1 He howled with pain, and Rika could faintly taste the iron in his blood on her teeth. taste it on her teeth ...

It seemed that you were dividing stuff into paragraphs way too much. Every two to three lines was a new paragraph. So make them longer, more fuller. And also put ...