Kraemer

Ironically, I get the synopsis done before I get the full length "novel" done. It's basically just my way of outlining events for the story..... A 5-10 pg outline can ...

Although I'm repeating people, the easiest is to switch during chapters. If you do it right it works amazing. GRRM (George R.R. Martin for those who aren't in the know) ...

one mistake I noticed is Living with them in piece… Could his human soul still exist somewhere inside him? it should be "living with them in peace" also, the title ...

ohh, and pm me if you add anything

iffy..... it could be true. but as stephen king said. "if you send a piece of writing in, and you get a check for it, and the check doesn't bounce, ...

I like it..... it's an interesting story. One mistake is What if?[i], he thought repeatedly. [i]What if he's...one of them? as you can see, you put the code for italics ...

good job.. As the man got closer, she could make out his eyes, his evil scorching eyes. Abruptly, the man stopped where he was and raised his arms towards the ...

wow.... that describes punk attitude right there 10/10

9/10 for last line.... good advice for any writer. But you can't rate anything more then 10/10. I mean come on... ohh and the book is better then the movie ...

Wow that's really short.... I tried to go back the way I came. I hit a wall. I was scared, but I knew three things, it was dark, scary, and ...

wow 8/10 lol

6/10 maybe its just a you had to be there kind of thing

He pulled out his rosery and said a quick prayor you spelled prayer wrong. certainly an interesting beginning. It all seems to happen a little bit fast though. You might ...

so true 9/10

I'm going to take it out on people I like lol 9/10 they're hilarious. "What sort of tomfoolary shall we get into today Harry?" "No tomfoolary today Ron. I'm sick ...