Kraemer

come on people!

This is a short story I will submit for writer's craft, I would like it polished up before I do. And this is also out of my usual writing realm ...

‘666 Evil’s Highway’ Obvious and unlikely. The highway to hell joke got over used with that song. Also not many houses live on a highway "666 Infernal Way" or "666 ...

Here's my critique. [spoiler]Editor’s Notes. (Kraemer) Interesting, you grab attention pretty fast and hold it there. You could work a bit on sentence structure, some seem incomplete or just don’t

kay' I downloaded it and will start reading and editing... have no idea when I'll be done but I wanted to say I love your musical taste!

okay. I like what you did with all the advice. It's quite the improvement. I hate to contradict, but i disagree with canislupis about the story. I like the juxtaposition ...

Kay so... First, I liked the sudden change in pace at the beginning, it was amusing. " Now where was i?" I should be capital. "We all know the story, ...

8/10 i think it should be Friends are like buttcheecks, sometimes crap gets between them but thats whe they stick together the most or something similar

wtf.... 7/8 made me laugh, but i dont get it

The boy cursed endlessly. How old is Beliel? He seems a bit old to be called boy. The heavy odor of illegal drugs littered the shop I wouldn't use the ...

you spelled chase wrong, 7/10

pretty good. Even though you called it chapter 1, it almost seemed like an intro. the description was nice. This one's particular craft was blood-reading, an art outlawed in the ...

Simply, Don't force it right now. If your writing isn't as long as you like, rethink the idea a bit, as they said, see if you could add some subplots. ...

Sin and Syntax I forget who its by.... It's a book on how to write good prose. I honestly find that the most lacking thing on this website. It's cool ...

Really it could depend on the type of story... In GRRM's series (if you check, I seem to reference this guy everywhere) A Song of Ice and Fire, he goes ...