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I was bored when I wrote the poem that all the responses are about. It was, admittedly, the stupidest poem I've ever written. So I have deleted it. Adios.

First, of all, that is freaky in the best way possible. Like, creepy, make-grown-men-cower-in-their-covers-at-night-when-they-hear-a-noise freaky. Only one thing: fascits doesn't rhyme all that well w

I think it's great, but I would like to be introduced to the main character, maybe? The main character could be watching, or could have something to do with the ...

I think I am going insane I think I broke my brain I think the world is spinning I think Insanity is winning I think we all shall fall I ...

I thought that it was amazing!! I would have liked to see a little less vaugeness, but still really amazing and very emotional. I love it.

I am sorry, but I do NOT like this poem.. It doesn't rhyme well, the rhythm is off, and it's just kinda stupid. It needs a lot of work, that's ...

That was amazing, first of all, especially for your first poem and I think that the others are wrong, I love the way that the words are spaced and I ...

I try and I try and I try I can't reach the top so many so many people I see above me All up there Basking the the glory of ...

Jenny sits and waits As he comes closer To her I love him so much she thinks to herself so much He comes nearer still He smiles when he sees ...

I love the black and white. I think that black and white makes it all the more dramatic. Also, I think that the way that some of the dogs were ...

This is a great poem. It is vague and mysterious, and yet you can still tell what the poem is about, you can still tell what the poem is about. ...

I love them all so much!! One that I have a bit of a problem with is one. The shadow editing is cool, but it is so overboard that it ...

Not bad, but strange. I think that it was very choppy and vague. The stanzas were different lengths and not at all in the same format, although that's not always ...

Some of the rhythm didn't seem to make sense, but it was still really good. Maybe it was just way different in my head then it was in actuality, but ...

That's so cool!! I can't believe that you made that.