KookieKatie

This is really a great poem. You have incredible technique - rhyme, rhythm, stuff like that. There are a few things I can confused on, though. At the end, you ...

How cute. I love it. It's adorable, really. An older sister commenting on her little sister growing up, no? I always admire poets and writers who can communicate a message ...

This is a really good piece, and finding inspiration in another writer's work is always a good trait to have, especially for a young budding writer. Just one thing - ...

Haha. Please record this and send it to me - it's kickass. I have to add, because I swear half of me is a perfectionist OCD freak, that there is ...

Uhh.. what? No, this isn't a poem. It's telling someone off with line breaks. Sorry. Try again. -KK

AMAZING!! I LOVE IT!! SO THOUGHTFUL, SO INCREDIBLE!! THE BEST PEICE OF ART I'VE EVER SEEN!! just one thing... where is it?

This is an intriguing poem. It's interesting how you love the person, yet you see all the flaws, you accuse them of being selfish, vulgar, etc. It makes you wonder ...

You have an innate ability for rhythm, technique, and rhyme. While your story has no names or specifics you manage to create a vivid picture with the reader's imagination. You ...

This reminds me of the part in The Chronicles of Narnia where Aslan appears and takes the dragon skin off of Edwin (is that what his name is? The mean ...

This is a moving and heartfelt poem because it happens to every girl where they feel like everyone is judging them based on what they look like, and every girl ...

If this is off the top of your head, I am greatly impressed. While the actual identity of "The Tapers" isn't specified, it adds to the mystery, the fear, the ...

I love your imagination, word choice, passion, and feeling. You are, truly, a great writer. If you are looking to edit or just to improve your next poem, try working ...

I have to say, it's well-crafted. Incredible technique and rhyme, with the rhythm being spot-on. However... This has no hook, nothing memorable or intriguing. It's the kind of thing you ...

At first I thought the first few comments were kinda weird. But then I saw your comment about how you changed it since they commented.. haha. XD I really like ...

Feeling like I'm slammed up against a wall with no turning back Keep pushing till I fall But pushing against Brick walls built to last I'm going nowhere And I'm ...