KookieKatie

I just have you say. you ave absolutely NO poetic technique. It's like you are using Dr. Suess as your template for writing. Right now, you are using all of ...

Although most of what you say was true, that was EXTREMELY CREATIVE. And when I wrote it, I was hyper, and wrote it with ANOTHER hyper girl, so you get ...

I'm warning you, don't read this! It was a dark and stormy night... BLAHHHHHHHH AND ALL THROUGH THE HOUSE, NOT A CREATURE WAS STIRRING, NOT EVEN A MOUSE. death blehhhhhh ...

I like this poem, it's intelligent, sad, and technical all at the same time. Kudos. Great work, keep writing! -KK

An interesting poem, but I have to say the ending left a little to be wanted. And not in a good way. Also, you don't have to put a comma ...

Um. This isn't emo. This is wannabe emo. Just saying. Also, the last line is NOT vaildated by artistic license, it's just stupid. The line "bread is my med" makes ...

Omigoshers. So sad... :( I have to say BRAVO for your amazing technique. It's a very typical poetry stanza construction, but you follow very well. I'm impressed. There's only a ...

Whoah. Twisted and fun and scary and sweet and just... whoah. I've read other works by you before, and it's really more of the best; I really love your poetry. ...

Interesting structure, but your description and constant metaphors are too confusing for the reader and it gets easily boring. You constantly change up what you are talking about without any ...

Really good. Most of the poems on this site are mostly pretty emo - reading a love poem is a nice change of pace. I would suggest a bit more ...

Intriguing, very intriguing. But my issue is that you have no definition, no emotion, and yet no mystery. It's very obvious you were required to do this poem for class ...

Omigoshers. Iloveyou. XD This is incredible! I don't think I've ever seen such great technique and emotion and rhythm, rhyme, FEELING come out of another poet on the website before!! ...

I never thought you'd be that guy. Other people act that way But I never thought I'd see the day That you would be that cliche I never thought you'd ...

I wasn't trying to be descriptive, I wanted it to be vague, sad, and blunt. Most of my other poems are the exact opposite, so I wanted to try a ...

I agree. This poem, while it has a good idea and follows a good basic story, isn't very good. I would recommend working on technique, rhythm, and rhyme, as well ...