Kobain72

I quite liked the general idea of the song and, although its length worried me at first, on re-reading the lyrics I actually think the sparseness of your descriptions works ...

Much like everyone else who has reviewed this I really like this style of poetry and the imagery you used so I don't really have much more to add other ...

yh it does, thanks =] do we need to/shud we wait till everyone[ish]'s back before we continue posting?

yh if we could quickly recap(?) i'd love to

:s has this died? =_(

i think we already got out of the sewers, didn't we? then the guards are about to get out too? thats wot i thought was going on anyway...

yaayyy. i will post sum stuff wen i can think of/see a way to enter

I really liked the song but i'm afraid i don't really have any constructive criticism for it. i do have a question though; i tried playing it and have to ...

*I wrote these after listening to a lot of Fall Out Boy so they were intended to be sung in a similar style to that, but since I haven't actually ...

I really liked this song too, although i have to agree with lordgluzman about the length. Depending on how long you plan the instrumental sections to be you might want ...

Hey, as far as criticisms go I couldn't really find anything that haven't already been mentioned and fixed so just wanted to add my support for this great song. It's ...

i thought this was great and, i dunno whether you meant this, but i could really easily hear this sung to a rage against the machine-like tune. and i actually ...

*sorry i haven't posted for a few pages now :s but i thought this was a really great storybook - or at least had potential - so am trying to ...

I'd like to be in this please, but it's really late and i've only just found it so i'll read it all and post a profile when i next get ...

At first listen [with the music] I wasn't entirely sure how the two parts fitted together, but I think I've worked it out now and it does sound really good ...