Kobain72

Seth He lifted himself out of the bath, wincing as pain shot down his arms and legs. He managed to drag himself out of the bath and fell, shivering, onto ...

*Just an idea. You don't have to use it. Just ignore it if you don't think it's any good* Things were not going well in the reception area since Seth ...

*Your characters don't seem to be in this scene so don't worry, see you...well talk to you, on monday. Oh and, thanks ambercoultis :)* Seth Seth swung the sword down ...

*thanks. if you dont like this you can replace it with your idea though* Seth The little girl jumped down off the hell hound and, landing lightly, she began stepping ...

*wasn't the things eyes green? just a thought* Seth Seth had thought the spirit looked familiar and now he remembered where he'd seen it before: in the Exorcist! Seth almost ...

What happens next?! What a gripping story, and that ending intrigues me (do you plan to write any more?). I especially liked the descriptions you used throughout. I also like ...

I did like it, but I thought it got very abstract towards the end (as other reviewers have said). I'm not sure what you're trying to say in that last ...

Good poem. I'm not sure whether I can add anything that anyone else here hasn't already said so I won't try. I like the shape poem idea you used and ...

*I thought so. Ok, lets try and get some scary stuff in it then!* Seth Seth wondered if anyone else noticed the room getting hotter and was almost glad when ...

Seth Seth just stood there (stunned at the sudden appearance of Sara) for a few seconds before finally snapping back to reality and returning her embrace. Wow he thought. She ...

This is a piece I wrote a year ago, it's not brilliant but I suppose it's somewhere to start. I would also like to apologise to new readers. The comments ...

*ok. what hav i missed? seth now has a girl friend (who's scared of everything?), it's impossible to write stories on a phone and yay seth isnt a wuss* Seth ...

*thanks* Seth He felt the weight of the sword in his hand...or rather, he felt its lack of weight. Regardless of its size, the sword weighed no more than a ...

Seth although hurt by how useless she thought he was, he grabbed the weapon and threw it to her. As it sailed through the air it shone with a golden ...

Seth "the boy" knew what those things were. even of the girl didn't (Seth wondered what the girls name was). They were the things of nightmare,and not just any nightmares, ...