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Re: The valley
I liked the imagery you presented in this poem. It was beautiful and depressing altogether. But hope might arrive in this, unnatural place, For a bird, a sparrow is flying ...
Sep 18, 2007 -
Re: Crystal Tree
I have to agree with Kitty, the "crystal tear" part needs to be fixed. And "strong", that was just a common mistake. Other than that, I really liked it. The ...
Sep 18, 2007 -
Re: Mafiya
Name: Kurokawa Kumiko Age: 26 Gender: Female Build: Stocky, 5'4 Eye color and Hair color: Green eyes,long black hair. Elite Group Rank: Foot soldier. Speciality: Hand-to-hand combat. Equipment: Metal
Sep 18, 2007 -
Re: Life Of Crime
She leaned against the wall for a moment, thinking she was letting herself get too close to him. It was dangerous business getting close to someone outside of your gang, ...
Sep 18, 2007 -
Re: Life Of Crime
"The Cobras are not on my sh*t list right now." She tossed back the last of her drink an stood from the booth, smoothing her hair down behind her. "Where ...
Sep 18, 2007 -
Re: War of Zynar
She approached the group, stopping next to Alana. She raised her hand and gently stroked the side of Tristian. Jade was different now; She was wearing her battle armor. It ...
Sep 17, 2007 -
Re: Typical Teenagers 2
Amber's stomach was full of butterflies as she turned each curve carefully. Her right hand clutched the dragon draping from a black rope necklace that she wore everyday, her left ...
Sep 17, 2007 -
Re: Life Of Crime
Kurokawa leaned against the wall lining the outside of the booth, propping her left arm on the table. She slowly ran her finger around the edge of the glass, a ...
Sep 17, 2007 -
Re: Life Of Crime
She ran her fingers over the top of her head and through her hair, leaning against the back of the booth. Her eyes sat upon Tylar after she sighed, thinking ...
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: Typical Teenagers 2
Her breath caught in her throat. She hadn't expected him to ask her that, especially at a time like this. Her face turned so red, you would have thought she ...
Sep 15, 2007 -
Re: Life Of Crime
"Yeah," Her eyes scanned down Tylar, wondering why he had saved them, "I guess I should leave.With a stunt like that, you should too." Her bat hung lazily from her ...
Sep 14, 2007 -
Re: Life Of Crime
Kurokawa was talking to Jamey when a loud gun shot was heard, and Jason's lean body flew against hers, knocking her to the ground. They hit the ground with a ...
Sep 14, 2007 -
Re: Typical Teenagers 2
"Siren!" Amber ran over to her, but flinched back as the big jock swung at Max. She heard bones snapping as she opened her eyes, and remembered Siren. Running over ...
Sep 14, 2007 -
Re: Life Of Crime
Kurokawa actually felt a little bad for Tanya; the Skyline had always been her prized possession. Tanya always raced with that car every time, and it was a pity to ...
Sep 14, 2007 -
Re: War of Zynar
She had, of course, been lost in thought when she heard Head talking to her. "Yeah, whatever. Any fight's a good fight." Jade didn't really care about the oath, she ...
Sep 13, 2007
