Knurla

"Hey Audra, nice to meet ya!" She shook Audra's hand then looked at Aren, "What are you guys up too?" She had met Aren only once, and was lucky she ...

(I don't know....He's not my character, and I don't even know what Lottie asked him.)

Wandering around the school grounds was boring, and she didn't know where Lottie was. She went back to her normal perch out in the courtyard and watched the birds fly ...

Aren's a dude, right? ****************** She had drifted off to sleep on the beach, and woke up about an hour later, a few of her friends still there, one other ...

(I'm in!) ****************** name: Jimena age: 17 gender: Female occupation: citizen/former Xuihcoatl member personality: tough and silent, much like the Amaterasu ninjas. She was well known for high-

Hi! Welcome to YWS! Hope you're having fun here! As for your poem, I think it lacks some emotion, and imagery as well. You never told us where the person ...

You know what this poem made me want to do? Slap my boyfriend for every time he's lied to me! I love how you portrayed it as sinful for the ...

Her eyes followed Ari to the phone, but she couldn't hear the conversation. Suddenly, she saw Ari's face fall. She shakily sat down her glass on a coffee table and ...

Such a lovely poem, dear! With all of the above, I would like to add that, in the first two lines, it seems like you have a "dangling modifier" (I ...

I have to agree with Vernon. I feel like this poem could have been expressed with many more words, and that you was just ready to end it. The imagery ...

(I'm so lost.....and who is Kiba?)

(Ok guys, I got totally lost, so I'm just gonna post something where as I'm back on the beach, cause I have no idea where you guys are.) ************************************************** After ...

She walked with Ari now, heading back toward the house. She wasn't in any condition to fight anymore of those things. As they walked, she wondered if the girl would ...

This poem was very beautiful, dear! It seemed like the narrator has a new love in her life, but at the same time leaves you wondering. ;) My favorite part ...

(Hey Dr. Jamie and Luna, why don't try making your posts longer so that way so many people won't get so lost in all of these pages? Just a suggestion....)