Kizzi

Far Away by Nickelback

That's good to know, I was worrying about that too. I want my writing critiqued, but I also want to publish it. Exactly, haha that's why I asked :)

Thanks sooo much!!! :D :D :D

So if I posted a first draft of a novel on here I would still be able to get it published? And I did remove it from the net does ...

So I hope this is the right place to ask this, but I don't know where else to ask. My question is: If you post a piece of your work ...

Thanks for the help!! I know I have issues with commas... *eyes the punctuation mark with disdain* Oh and the tenses thing, I struggled with that while first writing it, ...

Thanks for the critiques!!

Glad I can't envy them that. Take out that? Someone from court. She had nice perfume. It smelled like wine and roses. I don't remember much of what she said. ...

I agree that you use "She" far too much when you start sentences. So instead of using she you can flip sentences around like here: She sighed, wishing there was ...

I loved this. One of those where I was so transfixed I wanted to read through it a few times to let it soak in. I really like the imagery, ...

I definitely like the imagery. I'm not sure I know a person who hasn't felt like this, but yeah I liked the idea of being stuck in a maze where ...

“Man loses in a moment the memory of the things that have made him suffer.” - Adolf Hitler (Hitler’s Table Talk 1941-1944) The Holocaust started with one man and ended ...

I'll take a guess at this.. I think it's stuff like.. Easy listening and stuff and classical.. Although I'm not quite sure. Haha, opps sorry!! I asked for music... and ...

Does anyone else have a take on what contemporary writing is??

Meh, I'll take a stab at it. The thing is that it's hard to define. (And I'm no use at these things, so don't quote my guess). If it's contemporary, ...