Kix39

Please review this piece of work, I worked really hard on it and please tell me what you think, or else I don't know how I did! My Poem When ...

Please review, I want to get better and the only way I can do that is if you tell me how I did! [b]Journeys always come and go, But love ...

I really liked this poem! It was short, NO WAY perfect legnth! It was really touching and sweet! GJ

This is kind of a long poem, which i felt like I was forceing my self to read. It was nice, just a little too long to tell one topic. ...

I like this poem alot, It was touching. It flowed, and it was smooth.

I liked this peice, only it was a little too into me, I don't want to say lighten up, but them again I do!

I like these. They are all really nice! I love the colorful ones especially!!!

Its OK keep going at it. Maybe either less detail or more detail. Not both though. I can't decide if it looks to cartoony or to real. Make it one ...

I liked it allot. It was really touching, but maybe just go farther than just rhyming, like look up more complicated words and rhyme them. At some times I felt ...

I like it. I don't know what to say though, I kept on thinking that it ment more than what it really said... hmmm Kix39

Thanks! This is only my 2ed poem and I love the Comments!

Thanks! This is my 2ed piece and I love doing this! Please keep the comments coming!

Look Out there Way over there Look Out there I search And Search All day and night All to find nothing But Someday I Will find it What I'm looking ...

Everyday I get up at 5 A.M. I get up and go Go Go Go I go to work and eat on the way I don't really know there's nothing ...

o and what are the Point things that i always get when ever i post a reply??