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Re: Tales of the old religion Pt1
Hi there! :) I the idea of this, and it's one of the most original myths I've seen about the creation of the earth. However, I do think there are ...
Dec 19, 2010 -
Re: The Elder and the Proper
Hi! :D Hmmm, I like this. I especially like the ambiguity of whether the lady was real or just a figment of the MC's imagination, and the moral at the ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani Chapter 8(Summary Included)
Me again. :D Wowww, I was not expecting that plot twist! Or maybe not twist, more development, but either way it made for a really interesting chapter. I love the ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani Chapter 7 (Summary Included)
Hi again! :D Sorry it took me ages to get round to reviewing again. Blame it on a combination of me being lazy and having lots of homework. XD I ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 3
Hi again! :D Sorry it took me so long to get round to commenting on this. I really liked this chapter. The story's certaintly getting much more dramatic, and you ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani Chapter 5(Summary Included)
Heeeyyy again! :D Sorry it took me so long to get round to commenting on this. Now that I've given up on NaNo I have more time for reviewing, so ...
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
Hi! :) Sorry for being so late with this. Anyway, this story is continuing to be good, especially with the plot developments in this chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing ...
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 2
Hi again! :D I really liked this chapter. It's getting really interesting already with the romance between Liesabet and Rory, and with the slight tension between them about her being ...
Nov 17, 2010 -
Re: Broken But Not Crushed ~Chapter 1
Hi! :) I really like this, although I play the cello and I'm learning German, so I suppose it would appeal to me. :lol: But the writing was really good ...
Nov 7, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani Chapter 4(Summary included)
Me again! :D So, again, some interesting scenes. The characters are developing well - to me, the dynamic between Wolf and Seres is one of the most interesting things about ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani Chapter 3(Summary included)
Hey again! :D So, this story continues to be interesting, and I really like the way you described the altar, and the last part about Akian's soul. However, it's also ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: Alezrani Chapter 2(Summary Included)
Hey! :) I read the first chapter of this (and really liked it by the way), so I thought I'd come and review the next chapter. :D By the way, ...
Oct 30, 2010 -
Re: Doctor who: the cardiff meteor shower
Hey! Welcome to YWS! :D I really like some aspects of this, especially the way you wrote the Doctor. I could totally hear him saying, lets get some aliens that ...
Oct 27, 2010 -
Re: City Boy - Chapter One
Hey! :) I liked this, especially the way you described the house and the way the MC's personality came through. I do think there are a few things you could ...
Oct 26, 2010 -
Re: Paper Dolls Stop Motion
That's awesome! :D I liked the bit where they all got in the car. I think it might look smoother if you had more frames and smaller movement between them, ...
Oct 24, 2010