Kiwisatsuma

Hi! :) I really like this, although I play the cello and I'm learning German, so I suppose it would appeal to me. :lol: But the writing was really good ...

Welcome to YWS! :D Insane nerds are the best kind of people. Ooh, your novels sound interesting. Hopefully you'll post some of them on here soon? Also, yay fanfiction! I ...

Hi! Welcome to YWS! :D I lurked on here for a few weeks before joining up too, but I was really glad after I did because it's a really friendly ...

Hi! :D I love your avatar and signature, by the way. Doctor Who is such an awesome TV show. Teachers seem to hate me, Spesh Geography teachers. Well, to be ...

Ooh, you edited it! I think it works much better and is much less info-dumpey with the compass scene put in earlier, and I really like the description you put ...

Me again! :D So, again, some interesting scenes. The characters are developing well - to me, the dynamic between Wolf and Seres is one of the most interesting things about ...

Hey again! :D So, this story continues to be interesting, and I really like the way you described the altar, and the last part about Akian's soul. However, it's also ...

Hey! :) I read the first chapter of this (and really liked it by the way), so I thought I'd come and review the next chapter. :D By the way, ...

Jeremiah "Well, it's not everyday you see a girl walking around looking like she's off some crazy television programme," I said, gesturing towards Cressida. She glared at me. Okay, so ...

My mum says some really strange stuff when she's planning church services, especially All Age Worship. Mum: I need you to dress up as the back end of a pantomime ...

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Hey! Welcome to YWS! :D I really like some aspects of this, especially the way you wrote the Doctor. I could totally hear him saying, lets get some aliens that ...

Hey! :) I liked this, especially the way you described the house and the way the MC's personality came through. I do think there are a few things you could ...

That's awesome! :D I liked the bit where they all got in the car. I think it might look smoother if you had more frames and smaller movement between them, ...

Jeremiah I clenched my teeth angrily. So all this time it hadn't even been an illegal creature? Killer's owner glared at me. I cleared my throat hastily. "Well, I might ...