Kiwisatsuma

Hey :smt001 Keyboard's finally working so here I am :D From the looks of things you've had quite a lot of in depth feedback on this which I haven't read ...

Thanks :) I don't ever write poetry really, but apart from half finished fanfiction with bizarre plots, I mostly like sci-fi and romance and occasionally fantasy.

Hi! Well, I joined this site a couple of weeks ago and from what I've seen so far it seems really nice, and I thought I'd better do an introduction ...

Okay, thanks :)

Are we allowed to post about novel length fanfiction in the book review section? (I read an amazing fanfiction and I need somewhere to ramble about how brilliant it is ...

Hi and welcome :D I love sleeping, reading, eating and writing too, so we have that in common. XD I'm no reviewing expert either but I've found it's surprisingly fun.

Thanks for the reviews! I'll bear in mind what people have said about changing stuff and smoothing out the prose. :)

Ooh, I like this. It's very chilling and I like the way you slowly reveal details about the person. There are a few things I would maybe suggest: The walls ...

Brendan Fraiser

Thanks for reviewing, both of you! :) You're right, it probably is out of character for Dr. Cox to be so nice to JD. I've made him into too much ...

Well, this is a product of me being a hopeless romantic and listening to too much Taylor Swift. Rated 12+ for one use of bad language. Criticism is muchly muchly ...

Hi :) I think this has potential. I really like your main character - she's snarky and rebellious and kind of selfish and has her own distinct personality. It feels ...

This is an interesting idea and I think it has a lot of potential. There are just a couple of things I would suggest that the other reviewers haven't mentioned: ...

This is fanfiction for the TV show Scrubs. In case you haven't ever seen it (which you should 'cause it's amazing) Dr. Cox is an abrasive, sarcastic doctor (a bit ...

This made me laugh :D I like it, it's funny in an odd kind of way. There were a few spelling mistakes: imbesicle - imbecile quite - quiet damnabble - ...