Kittengirl2

Interesting... I like it. Really great descriptions. I think that colorful funky text takes away from it a bit, but it put a smile on my face. Although maybe that ...

Not sure if I like this. I want to add to it, but I also think that more will ruin it... Help? I walk along an empty street, shadows pass ...

I like this. I've been trying to find something you could improve, besides what other people have already said, which I agree with. But I can't, so good job. :D

OK, did I miss something? How do they know all this stuff about her? Do they have some psychic powers I don't know about? I agree with Sierra, you're definitely ...

In the beginning, I understand now that it was the middle of the night when she woke up for the first time, however it's a bit confusing there. You should ...

I love this. It's short and sweet, descriptive but not boring, and now I wish it was raining so I could go outside. No offense to Alzora, but I disagree ...

Hi, I'm new. I write stories and the occasional poem, though they usually don't get finished. I hope to change that someday... I'm a photographer and take pictures all the ...