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Re: I am the wild horse
KissKiss08 wrote: I'm still working on making my poems more consistent, but I tried to make it as formal as I could without completely changing my original draft. Formal? As ...
Apr 26, 2009 -
Re: I am the wild horse
Thanks for the reviews guys. :D I understand how some of the peom cvould be a little confusing because the poem is not talking about an actual horse it's a ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: I am the wild horse
I'm still working on making my poems more consistent, but I tried to make it as formal as I could without completely changing my original draft. I am the wild ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: Maryland Dialect/Accents
Hey again, I seached youtube some more and here's a really good video If you listen to the guy talking in the background it's a good example. If you have ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Maryland Dialect/Accents
I live in Maryland, It's kind of hard to describe my accent. I know we stretch out our Os alot like Hello for example I say hellOHW. But really it's ...
Feb 7, 2009 -
Re: Chat Go Bye Bye
Yay! *claps*
Jan 9, 2009 -
Re: Creation
I agree with Kaylyn completely. The poem was okay, but I expected better judging by you reviews. the stanzas are a bit confusing. there's no order. It looks like there ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: Do You?
well I thought it was really good. The part about it being redundant i know you ment for it to be that way. Since it's not a rhyming poem, the ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: Do You?
well I thought it was really good. The part about it being redundant i know you ment for it to be that way. Since it's not a rhyming poem, the ...
Dec 22, 2008 -
Re: HI all !!
Hi, welcome to YWS. I'm KissKiss08 but you can call me Heather. As Adna said, be sure to check out the rules. What type of short stories do you write? ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: Hi im new!
Hi tierra. Welcome to YWS! I'm KissKiss08 but you can call me Heather. What kind of fiction do you write? What sports do you play? PM me if you need ...
Nov 30, 2008 -
Re: The Journey Home
To clarify the "open car door" part Open is describing door. They are running to the car doors which are open... sorry, I don't know how else to put it. ...
Nov 4, 2008 -
Re: (Insert Generic "Hi!" Thread Name Here)
Welcome to the site. :D We have a 2:1 policy here, meaning you must have atleast two reviews for every one story or poem that you post. I see you ...
Oct 30, 2008 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]
8/10
Oct 29, 2008 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish 2
Granted, but you're blind :D I wish there was a cure for AIDS/HIV. That was the best line ever! ANyway, Granted but your wish was to be miserable. I wish ...
Oct 29, 2008