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Re: 1) The Quantum Hole: power they couldn't have imagined
Wow. I liked this a lot. It kind of reminded me of H.G. Wells' story, "The Star"! A sentient body of antimatter is an interesting idea to posit. This is ...
Feb 15, 2009 -
Re: The Millionth Run - Chapter 2
Thank you for your critique! I went back and cleaned it up a bit in my saved draft :) Also, I put a footnote at the very end of the ...
Oct 15, 2008 -
Re: The Millionth Run - Chapter 2
Thanks for the review! I went back to my saved draft and tinkered around with a few things (the main editing awaits when I finish the first draft of the ...
Sep 5, 2008 -
Re: The Millionth Run - Chapter 2
bump
Aug 31, 2008 -
Re: The Millionth Run - Chapter 1
Thanks a lot for the critique! You are correct in your guess about the timeline; this chapter, though told by Desmond to someone on July 20th, 1969 (the night of ...
Aug 8, 2008 -
Re: The Millionth Run - Chapter 1
Anyone have any helpful tips for this piece?
Aug 6, 2008