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Re: Visions of the Past- Chapter 3
Here's chapter 3! I hope you enjoy it! Let me know if you see any mistakes! Thanks! Chapter 3 Abigail rested her forehead on Mrs. McHale’s hand, begging God, begging ...
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Re: Freedom
Candice lifted her bag up and over her shoulder. It was time to get moving. She could still feel the burning sensation underneath the skin of her back from the ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Mirror World- Prologue
I've had this idea in my head for quite some time, I just decided to share it with you guys, let me know if you want more! The noise of ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: The Reach N' Grab - Infomercial
Okay so this is a Infomerical that I had to do for school, I thought I'd share it with you guys...Enjoy! ~The Reach n’ Grab~ Announcer: “Too short to reach ...
Jan 18, 2010 -
Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (0)
Hiya! That was a really good piece! The emotion was so vivid, so in your face. I also loved the description! The way you made the rain her "friend" of ...
Jan 17, 2010 -
Re: Visions of the Past- Chapter 2
Once again, thanks for all the comments! I've edited this, to the best of my ability, according to the suggestions given to me, please let me know if you see ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Mindset
~Mind Set~ (6 Students are sitting, facing the audience. There are 6 desks altogether; 2 rows, 3 facing the audience, another 3 behind. The students are all wearing sweaters and ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hello everyone! I'm new to this website, but hopefully I'll get a better understanding of how to use it. Feel free to read/comment any of my posted piece's, I adore ...
Jan 12, 2010 -
Re: House of Mirrors
Wow, thats really good! I had to read it twice, the first time I was a little confused, but I think that's just the flavor of the piece. I like ...
Jan 12, 2010 -
Re: Cartoon creation on paint ms
Wow! Thats takes alot of talent and skill! Nicely done! :D
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Re: Dreams
Let us talk about people’s dreams, shall we? Everyone has a dream of some kind, an aspiration if you will. You could want to become a doctor, or maybe you ...
Jan 12, 2010 -
Re: Visions of the Past- Chapter 1
Thanks for all the comments on my work! I've tried to edited this according the the sugestions that I've recived thus far, thanks so much everyone! Let me know if ...
Jan 12, 2010
