KingKamor

I just signed up, and I'm already getting anxious. Not the bad kind, the good kind that gives you those goosebumps and shivers of awesomeness that pulse through your body ...

((Okay, that's just weird. I have a character named Jacky, and she's pretty loud sometimes. .>)) Thanks for the thoughts, Sam. =3 *Gives you a nickel* =D

I started when I was eight or nine, which is pretty late compared to some of the other peeps here. -__-; When I was little, I always did introductions to ...

Okay, I'm writing a story (duh), and have been writing it in third person for the first ten or so chapters. I use scene changes a lot, and whenever I ...

Okay, slow down for a bit. All you have to do it make this thing about a tenth of it's current size. Readers don't like to read this much text ...

Aas a lover of fantasy, I really liked this. It was good how you opening with an actiony scene, and I felt a a bit of suspense when Steel was ...

I read the first two paragraphs, found myself in a not-yet-hooked state, and then asked myself, "I wonder how long this is?" So I looked on down and saw the ...

Time to get cracking *cracks knuckles*

Really nice, I love the girl. The neck was big in the first picture. The grey. It made it depressing like you said. It always rains in this miserable world. ...

Whoa, that first picture was skinny. I like the drawing of the girl, her sweater was very pretty and her skirt was nice. Pleats, woot. Muffin Wow, I didn't know ...

Yus! Critiqueness! =D It looks like the capitalization is done by foce of habit, because when I'm writing in a notebook, I don't write it like that. o.O; Not that ...

Lizzy: Fruits Basket? o.O Whatever. XD Thanks for the comment, and yes, I did try to make them look a bit like photographs. Kyte: Yeah, I don't usually add color ...

Heheh. It's nice to get away from my dramatically sarcastic story and read up on some pure and simple high school life story. *sighs* Anyway, good job, though your description ...

For some reason, I had a lot of fun writing this chapter. Probably because I've never written very many sad stories, so this was a fun new experience for me, ...

The main characters' relationship in mine is based on a sudden shift in lifestyle for one of them... but the girl kind of hates him at the beginning, so I ...