Kimberlykat

This is amazing! I really enjoy the repetition! It grasps a certain part of me. Great work, what can I say?

Great work Bubbles, very creative, yes! God Bless, KIM

Thank you all for the comments! appreciate it! Will hopefully find time to edit it and...yes, that. Thanks again! God Bless, KIM

It reminds me of E. E. Cummings "I carry your heart, I carry it in my heart" ...but a sadder, sorry and more regretful version here. Very emotional and interesting! ...

Yeah, cheers to you to Bubbles. I took your advise and cut it short! I hope it still sings out there entire meaning of the poem but yeah, thanks a ...

When Diety invaded Humanity The Glory broke through brick barriers when the Ancient of Days in His own divine light clothed His honor with shame, when He wrapped His Supernatural ...

okay, first of all, wow! Brilliant and genius! I didn't really understand that last verse/stanza but the first two lines were great!!! Keep up the good work!

Brilliant piece. Amazing work!

Wow, that was brilliant!! Makes me wanna have soup!

Wow! It puts me in a state of confused understanding if that makes sense! Amazing!

Michael Antonini stood in the midst of sunflowers with a gun to his temple. The night sky was black, and only a single thick cloud lit grey from a faint ...

Amazing amazing chapter there! keep up the good work!

These tears are manufactured At the Factory of Abomination, A fractured license to produce My pain A lifetime supply of sorrows The vision can’t recognise tomorrow I can’t wait for ...

As Trident said, good use of sound...but I don't think the poem has much more beyond that. I have trouble understanding it, and I think this is a result of ...

Hi Kimberly, There are some interesting sounds in here and I like the way you have experimented with sound. I suggest using punctuation in your poem as it is a ...