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Re: Out for Blood - Chapter 2
ummm, I don't particularly understand what this comment means? Lol
May 25, 2012 -
Re: Out for Blood - Chapter 2
Taken into consideration and fixed :) Thank you! And I know I'm pushing who she has become a tad, but that should be it. I planned on slacking off on ...
May 24, 2012 -
Re: Out for Blood - Chapter 1
Presley... I don't really know. It just kind of materialized on the page :) Thanks for the feedback too, glad you enjoyed it :)
May 23, 2012 -
Re: Out for Blood - Chapter 1
Thank you for pointing those out :) I've gone back through and edited (slightly) taking your tips into consideration. Thanks again :D
May 23, 2012