Kim

i loved this story, very well written. very discriptive. it had me to the very end. i could feel the emotions, here the birds, see the sunshine and feel the ...

i am so sorry, that you have had to go thru all that. life is sometimes not fair. i am happy that you are writing, it helps to get things ...

you are on to something, a very good plot and an unexpected ending, the only thing i didnt like was the story line moved to fast. to much information in ...

what a beautiful poem, it hit home with me, maybe because i just lost a friend, and this poem fits it perfectly. you are very good, dont stop writing.

i really liked this, the discription is very real. i sensed the mental, but more of the underworld, not always speaking english, made me think of evil, for they speak ...

ok, that was sad and scary, i only hope it isnt your true feelings, while reading it , it just seemed very cold, the person was very cold. if that ...

ok, so i read the 2nd chapter first, it was enough for me to see if you had the first chapter still up. i really like your story. and will ...

i so enjoyed reading this, the description and feelings are all there. i was drawn to read the entire thing, and was hoping for more. do you have more of ...

all i can say is wow,,,,,,,,,no negative here, i loved it. it actually made sense to me, which could be scary in away. but you are good, no you are ...

pretty much everyone else slammed it, i guess i dont understand. they look for just the grammar. i loved it, i felt the emotion, the insecurities, the love. i think ...

everyone else has brought up the negative, so you dont need that from me. i am not the best on grammar, so when i read, i look at what it ...

all i can say is wow,,,,,,,,,i was drawn from the first paragraph, very good description of the characters and their emotions. keep going, and i willl keep reading.

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I liked this very much. the discription was amazing, i could feel the power of the mind. actually i loved this, and i normally do not iike poetry. keep going, ...

hi, your story is very interesting, i liked where it was going. The only problem is the first 3 paragraphs had me completely confused, The hidden children? ect. Starting with ...