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Re: Beautifully Evil #4
this definately does not belong in romance. lol. you hve me hooked BBB. this is very good, keep posting. i like your imangination, i had no idea that your story ...
Oct 18, 2007 -
Re: Talking to Chris
this is very good, it starts out with happy feelings, and ends dramatic. i like it. kim
Oct 18, 2007 -
Re: untitled a novel chapter one, i have revised this chapter
i have revised this chapter, please go to Something Out There, there are now 4 chapters posted. this is the first time i have tried to write, please be honest ...
Oct 17, 2007 -
Re: Love is a Cliche
i have yet to read anything of yours that i didnt like. i love your discriptions, and the emotion you put into your writing. kim
Oct 17, 2007 -
Re: Beautifully Evil #3
i love it, i sure hope you have the 4th chapter done, cause honestly it is hard waiting . :D you took your story in a whole different direction, i ...
Oct 17, 2007 -
Re: Beautifully Evil #2
thanks for letting me know the 2nd chap. was up. other then typo errors, i really like it. i could feel the emotion you are trying to aim for. her ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Wint'ry
i really like the color contrast. The design is unique. great job kim
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: painting, please critique
i like to paint, and have taught myself, i started with pencil and then to oil,would like a little critique and honest opinions. thanks kim ps, didnt realize the picture ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Beautifully Evil #1
i enjoyed reading your story, i hope you finish it. if you add to this, could you let me know ? so i can continue reading. i think you are ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Wide Awake in a Dream
wow, this really draws you in and makes one think. it can mean so many things to different people. it is great and i loved reading it, infact i went ...
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Elena Maionsa - Sept
As always, i love reading your work. It keeps me reading to the end, and waiting for more. so keep going will ya. :) Kim
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Smoke
I really liked this, from the beginning to the end. I am not good with poetry, but this seemed to flow easily. Great job. Kim
Oct 16, 2007 -
Re: Summer of First Love
I thought it was pretty good, for just writing it on the spot. i liked it. it had the emotion but also showed a very stable person, you dont see ...
Sep 25, 2007 -
Re: Big Sister
i really liked this, i am sure that anyone who reads your poem will in someway, connect with it. very well written. keep writing.
Sep 22, 2007 -
Re: Hearts..
what i felt whle reading your poem, is that two hearts connect again. find each other, since it is internet communication they cant quite combine. also at the end you ...
Sep 22, 2007
