Kim

wow , this is beautiful kim

Something Out There Chapter One The night air was crisp as was the ground under Seth’s footsteps. Fall finally made its entrance with the trees letting go of their leaves ...

this is very good, i just jumped on your site to check out your work, you are great. now i am going to go read the rest you have up.lol ...

i like this , it is getting really interesting. i like the way you are starting to pull your characters together. the only thing i can find is, does christian ...

thanks for posting this BBB. this story has so many twists and turns, i would never have thought mary and krobel related. wow. keep posting please. even if i am ...

As i started reading, i could understand , then get confused, then understand. i liked it . it kept me guessing, you put emotion in there and at times i ...

this is very good, i like the way your characters talk to each other so easily. i dont normally look for errors as i read,, i choose to enjoy the ...

Free writing? wow, this is great, the detail, everything, are you going to keep going with this story?, i think you should.

i enjoyed reading this, you are very good. the only part that confused me was the rest stop, with a lobby. i put myself at a bank. but everything else ...

I still love this, i never no where you are taking me as i read. awesome.

i loved the discription, i actually had the mental view of the land scape. i hope you post more on this, you are very good , cant find a single ...

hey BBB, this one kinda scared me lol, wasnt expecting the ending. the story is great, the only thing i can find is, honestly, a mare is a female horse. ...

thanks for your honest comments, the reason for the first two was because i had only posted the first few paragraphs to get feed back. i took their advice and ...

i really like the story, and the friendship between the two boys. the names had me confused tho, switching between real and the nick names. but you are good, keep ...

alot of meaning , in such a short space. i like it