Kim

you did great, i love this story. i am not going to even look for writing errors. i am reading this for the joy of reading an awesome story. i ...

this is awesome, this flowed and was easy to read and visualize. i love it. kim

this is going to be a great story , there are a few grammar errors, but it is the first time you have written, so that is normal, trust me ...

wow, you do have alot on your plate, most of what you came up with is good, try concentrating on one thing, FINISH it. then take the second one and ...

i am not used to reading in this form, but your story is great, i love your sensed of humour. great story. kim

i would like to know if i should keep going on this story or not. this is my first time writing. not sure if it is that good, and would ...

Something Out There Chapter 5 The sun was starting to break over the mountains of the small town of White Rapids. Sitting in a large tree, Aronn had tucked himself ...

i dont know much about poetry to critique. but this made me laugh. i thought it was very well done. i enjoyed reading it. bear is there nothing you cant ...

wow, this is great, i enjoyed reading, it ended to quick. but thats just me. i was wanting to go on. the only thing that didnt flow, is calling the ...

this is very good bear, you seem alot more relaxed writing about humour and life struggles. i can see you improving constantly. ( all your other stories are great to). ...

very well written, i really like it. the characters are not confusing, i found it easy to follow. great job, keep going. kim

yep,i really like this, it is intriguing and suspenseful. The chapter flows when reading, i also like the discription, i could imangine where she was. kim

i like this, and could sense where you were going, it is very good, now i am going to go keep reading, got to read the next chapter. kim

wow you got hammered on this one, icaruss should not be posting replys. i liked it, i could see the humour and the frustration. i am not one to critique ...

this is awesome, i actually put myself there. i have nothing negative to say. i have reread it a couple times. i love this. kim