Kim

thanks for letting me know you posted this chapter. i had no idea the story would take this route, i really like it. alot of surprises. cant wait till the ...

Bear , this is awesome again. i am intrigued with this story. it is well written. i cant wait for tthe next chapter. kim

i guess i am not sure where i should have posted this. I am sorry if i put it in the wrong place. Thank you for letting me know. I ...

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welcome, you will love this site. before you post any of your work, you need to comment on others. the home page shows the newest ones posted. the more you ...

hi gwen, welcome to yws. i love animals to. i have one dog, one retarded cat.( seriously he has down syndrome :) my rat died a few months ago, i ...

i think this is great. it is very sad and you show the emotion. you did very well. keep going. kim

i reallly like it, i cant write poetry so i cant critique for you. but i can tell you if i like it lol. you are very good. kim

thanks bear. i will fix the sentence, the angel that kicked Anna demon, was one of the war angels sent to guard the house and seth. i am trying not ...

wow bear, this is awesome. the only thing i found was , in one sentence you used had three times, probably a typo. but that is it. your writing is ...

This is awesome, wow , hurry and post the next chapter. i love this . kim

this is good bri, i found a few errors, just a few :) Wiping the water off her face that had slashed up on to it he watched as she ...

Chapter 6 Seth watched as Bri left the room, her sadness showing on her face. He to worried about Anna. He got up off the bed and walked over to ...

your story is great, you just need to take your time while writing, or when you are done read it aloud. you will catch most of the spelling errrors your ...

i like how you write. the story flows, and is fun to read. other then a few spelling errors, this a very suspenseful and had me wanting to keep reading ...