Kim

i think these are very good for a start, you have the symetrical balance between them. that is very important. i always start with the eyes, if they dont work, ...

wow, this is great, i have never tried this kind of art before, you did an awesome job. its also funny. keep going. kim

i painted this on a wooden lid, sorry about the lighting, it doesnt really show all the detail.

this is so great bear. i never know where you are taking me when i read. i love this. i only found one thing that did not sound right. "Now, ...

wow, this is absolutely beautifully written. i really liked your discriptions, and emotions. this felt good to read, gives a good feeling. you are very good. kim

you asked for a title for your story. so no critiques from me. for you first time it is pretty good. you have a talent, it just takes time to ...

.Are you alone in this world? Are you alone in this world? No you are never alone. There is always one who loves you. Does your soul ache with loneliness? ...

i dont have to critique, i think they pretty much covered everything. so i got the pleasure of reading it just for the enjoyment. i really liked it. i thought ...

i found this interesting, i like the discription you use, but i also like the metaphors. it was short , but you got your point out there, i really liked ...

i love music, and you put the emotion in your poem. it is absolutely beautiful. the only thing i would change is breaking it up into paragraphs. it makes it ...

you did an awesome job. i loved the discription. normally to much isnt good, but in your case, it turned out beautiful. i personally dont like winter, ( i live ...

this is very good, i like how you wrote the poem with mostly S's. very different. there is no way i could come up with something using one letter of ...

grey's anatomy

wow, this is going to be a good story. i was just going to comment on " her spin", that confused me lol. but i reread your story twice and ...

i like it, it is short but discriptive. and the impulse ones are always the best. great job. kim