Kim

what i find sad in your question, is that you had to post it here to find your answers. you wont find them here. no one is going to agree ...

ok so i live in this tiny glass bowl, where there is absolutely no privacy. i mean none at all! i can barely move around in here. my exercise consists ...

I was at the park with my dog, when suddenly I saw a camel doing the tango and a kangaroo hopping around the square, dancing with a lemur wearing a ...

i like this, it shows strength, and the ability to overcome. the only errors i found are a few periods missing at the end of a few lines. other then ...

how do you do this? consistently write awesome poems. i just love your work. i have to wait for the writers bug to bite. i really like the how you ...

This is really good. i enjoyed reading it. kim

i know exactly where you are going with this. there is no privacy, and really no where to write to show your feelings without someone reading them and taking them ...

wow, this is very good. i could not see anything wrong with it. excellent discriptions. you did a great job discribing the kings defeat. i really enjoyed reading this. you ...

this is very good, but you are right, it is missing something. i keep rereading it to figure out what it is. it is missing something soft. ( that doesnt ...

Do you beleive the sun exists even in the night. you dont see it at that time. so is it still shining? If you truly want to know God, all ...

this is great, what a neat way to write about a friend. i so like this. your friend is lucky to have someone like you . kim

this is great bear, i really like how payton has taken landon under his wing. it makes your story more personable. in your last sentence is a spelling error, "minute". ...

i just want to thank everyone that has commented. i appreciate all of it. thanks again. kim

i thought this poem was great. i could tell your heart was writing it. honestly who cares about the format if it is written to get your feelings out. that ...

these are beautiful, you did an awesome job with catching the color. I think you have found your calling. kim