Kim

your poem in no way annoyed me. dont bring yourself down. kim

this one is ok i noticed her proportions are not as defined as in your previous drawing . i like the angle she is in, although i need to point ...

this is very good, i like the detail, you have the proportions right. i have never been able to draw people, so i admire anyone who can. excellent job. kim

this is great, what caught my eye is the black borders. no straight lines. the accuracy is awesome. kim

i liked this. i understood ( i think) where you were going with it. basically someones life was worthless, they died, and you dont miss them. your discription showed a ...

thanks for you honest comments. i will definately learn from this one.

your story keeps getting more exciting, grosse but exciting. It was dark, meaning it was nighttime. ( try rewording this , something like, "It was dark, which meant it had ...

Lost At Sea Have you ever felt displaced? Like you didn’t belong where you are. Your mind is unable to find rest. Your heart pounds, Like the waves against the ...

i really like the first paragraph, but after that it seems that your discriptions are less. try adding more to each paragraph, show that he is gorgeous, not just that ...

This is beautiful, using the discriptions to bring out the emotions really works. i found myself relating to this, as i think a lot of readers will. i really enjoyed ...

this is great. i didnt see any errors, although i truly wasnt lookiing for any. the story line reads so smooth. it got my attention from the very first paragraph. ...

i like stupid lol 8/10

this is a very beautiful poem. i completely enjoyed reading it. i like the discriptions you use, and the emotion. very well done. kim

i really like the story line, but it moves way to fast. all of a sudden they are in a hotel? i think you need to stay in one place ...

thats because you were running for your life to get indoors.