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I love this peice--it has a certain haunting beauty. Haunting because of the melancholy tone, but it creates such a lovely picture in my mind.

Wow. When I was eight I was still interested in poop jokes.

So far it has caught my interest. I do agree with the "show, don't tell." Otherwise, I think you have something great in the works. All I can say is ...

I love Remember It's pretty fancy. His music is one of the few kinds that I can work while listening to. Mainly because I don't understand what he is saying. ...

Do you know what Areida means? I'm fascinated by the meaning of names.

Hehe I'm too much of a lazy arse to quote all of you and write back, so I'll just write you all back in this post. ;) To Niteowl-- I ...

Thanks! So what kind of genre do you write in? Or do you prefer poetry or script writing?

Sorry, I tried to indent the paragraphs with the "pre" button, but it didn't work, so bear with me. I hope it's not too hard to read without the indentations.

This is in second draft form. I just want to know if you are intrigued by the prologue. I want to know if it leaves you wanting to read more. ...

I thought the language was beautiful. It flowed really smoothly, and it created a nice vision of what time creates. Anyway, it was a really cool piece of work.

I love it. It captures the essence of insomnia perfectly. I used to suffer from insomnia. I still do sometimes. The way you describe things creates such a vision in ...

. . . pretty. He's my favourite singer in the world! Most of the time I don't understand a bloody word he's saying, cos the only thing I know how ...

Hmmmm. I see a lot of LOTR fans. I've read quite a bit of J.R.R. Tolkien's work. The Silmarillion is definetly his best book. I'm actually not a big fan ...

I don't know if there are many musical junkies out there... but the last two big ones that came out (Chicago and Moulin Rouge) I've been an absolute groupie over. ...