KilljoyRetardedFish

This is my contest entry for 'If it were a story,' and the song used for inspiration is When we say (Juice box) by A.J. Rafael. "Hey, are ya gonna ...

I really liked your story, but there was one part that I had an issue with. Adele stated that she had forgotten that day, but later she says she can ...

I LOOOOOVE THIS! It describes...well me. The message is clear, and I'm pretty sure everyone can relate to this. I completely agree because I've thought that way and felt that ...

I liked it!!!! You made going into a crazy man's head amazing; I normally don't like these kinds of stories, but you made it very understandable. Stories about crazy people ...

"We'll always be friends," you had declared. Your eyes told no lies, smile wide and pure. I had believed you then. But what about now? Are we? When you needed ...

This is very beautiful, I enjoyed reading it a lot. I envisioned this happening, so you can portray the 'show, not tell' rule very well. Keep writing I would like ...

Wonderful, sadly this review won't really help, but I feel the emotion written in this. Sometimes these types of poems are crappy, but I related to it very well. Keep ...

I liked this songfic, but it was a little difficult to follow. I understand you need to imply some things, but explaining at least who the girl was that the ...

This is very cute, I enjoyed this a lot. Even though my first post here is a poem, I'm not really a fan of poetry, but I just couldn't resist ...

I LOVED THIS. *ahem* Now that I'm done, it makes you want to slap Nathan upside the head just for Cheyenne. The emotion is clearly shown in this story, and ...

I love this story. It's not cheesy at all. In a way, you could just see this happening. It makes you want to find love as powerful as that (even ...

The cool wind blows my hair in front of my eyes but I pay no regard we had walked here multiple times, your cheery eyes return to haunt me the ...

I loved it. The reality, and the love that the man had for his wife. Even though generally I don't like stories that show the actual dialogue, I especially enjoyed ...