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Thank you! MANY MANY THANKS! I loved the article, it helped out a lot Time to tackle more first person projects >:3

This has opened my eyes so much. I've never thought of it in that way, just as in 'what would I do if I had their personality?' I guess I ...

So my friends tell me I'm really good using third person point of view, but I want to write with first person.... The problem is, I can't seem to create ...

I agree with Ad, you did end it a little bit abruptly. However, with the exception of that, it was well written. It made me wonder what their issues are, ...

Ahh! That was amazing! It reminded me of Demolition Lovers by My Chemical Romance (couldn't help but notice you were a fan as well

First of all, I'd like to say that this story revolves around a lyric from Mago de Oz (Molinos de Viento: Si puedes definir, el odio o el amor, Amigo ...

What if I ran away? Never looked back and kept running, until I was out of breath. What if I died today? Fell on the ground, never lived at all, ...

The title should be one that you come up with, if you want ideas, you could make it based off of an object that is of importance to your character. ...

It's a little bit too short, and it doesn't exactly explain much. I'm going to assume there's going to be a Chapter 2? It needs some explanation. Swallowed by light? ...

Your story is a little bit confusing to read. Try not to put a space before a comma, it comes after. She was gone dead , Burned alive I blacked ...

These lyrics are really good, the message is clear, and they are trying to let their partner know kindly. They remind me of Linkin Park's Numb, but not so harsh ...

I saw no mistakes in your writing, which is always good. The story in itself was beautiful, a man whose world ends when his wife dies. It's a topic that ...

I gotta admit...even the silly, not serious whatsoever stories that you create are amazing. I found nothing wrong with it, since I'm pretty sure everything else has already been pointed ...

You've done it again! I LOVED IT. The honor killing, the hesitations, it was all amazing. I feel that you captured reality, the harsh reality that we live in today. ...

I loved your poem, it flowed very beautifully. Sorry I can't really help much with this because I am not very good at poetry (even though I write a lot ...