Killer-Ewok

I'm assuming that when you write the second piece your going to reveal what the non-human species are doing and what they look like, i think this meant to be ...

I liked it, cant wait to the actuall battle, but when you write it about the battle, make sure to include the sourroundings of your hero, imangine your him for ...

Im new and still learning, but i thought the description from the first paragraph about the building and the fences was excellent, but ive been told to describe everything, so ...