Killer-Ewok

i dont really see how it compares to lord of the rings, i mean the only thing that has been compied are there orcs and dwarves, i took the witch ...

I'm going to use speaking in this story, so its fits with the other 3 ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- Cytre looked around at her surroundings, but she only

I'm assuming that when you write the second piece your going to reveal what the non-human species are doing and what they look like, i think this meant to be ...

oh i didnt realise, so how do i subtistuse the people speaking, beacuse i cant think of any other way to put it. and thats gonna be annyoing.

Some one told me about no chat speak in a story, i dont really agree with that, but there the rules so ill obey them. But not on the evil ...

i liked it, it pulls you in, and is quite complex, but not that hard to understand (if you know what i mean) So are you going to finish the ...

so what do you think would be the best, most dramatic ending? i was thinking that maybe cytre tries to kill the dwarven king, but when she approaches him, the ...

i was thinking that the dwarf king had just killed the lord, but cytre steps in and duels him = "She jumped down from the grey faltering wall, gripping her ...

Thanks, i did spend longer on this story than the last one, and ive slowed down the pace so i can get the characters across. and about the punctuation, you ...

Just out of interest, why was a boy/man trying to kill a catapillar??? it seems kind of pointless, unless its a giant man-eating catapillar :lol:

I liked it, cant wait to the actuall battle, but when you write it about the battle, make sure to include the sourroundings of your hero, imangine your him for ...

This part of the story is mainly looking into the background of some of our characters. (And im also sorry for the grammer, i couldnt sleep and im writing it ...

Im new and still learning, but i thought the description from the first paragraph about the building and the fences was excellent, but ive been told to describe everything, so ...

ok i understand what u mean, but im still trying to improve my story writing, thats why i joined this website, to get hints and tips, and for the spelling ...

The black cloaked figure shot a glance into his generals eyes. "I'm sorry my master i couldn't capture the king...I'm sorry my lord" the generals voice broke as the cloaked ...