Kiki

READ me after, please

Chapter Five Negotiations Hell found me. I was beginning to think that the demon I saw the other night was a bad omen. It was cold in this dungeon. I ...

Let me start out by saying that I love the name Rain/Rayne. It's such a beautiful name! Unfortunately for Rayne, hers wasn’t a typical circumstance. They named her Rain Sinclair ...

Wow..just wow! I love how it was written! Very well written and I loved it. And what never felt? The smooth press of hands compared, for mine are a child’s ...

Such a short poem! But for this one I think it works.

Thank you so much Alice

Haha :D Thank You ^^ But I'm over the guy and all now :P I Wrote that a little while ago, we are still friends though which is good :wink: ...

Very nice hun.. I feel the pain. I know how love hurts. Although I've learned that if it's meant to be, it will be. And if not, so what? Move ...

I still really like it!! The revised one has more description. Although there is still a lot of dialog, which still isn't a bad thing considering you put a lot ...

Wow that was intense. I like it =D Keep it up! The wording sounded right to me and it was extremely intense. And that's what rough copies are for, posting ...

Yay reviews! The grammar and everything is already done. SO I will state that I REALLY like this =D I loved how you worded the scream assaulting Imelda's ears. I ...

I enjoyed this =D I dont remember if i read the first chapter or not, but I think i did xD Keep it coming!! *huggles* ^_^

Thanks so much Meadow =D The daze was caused by her headache. >.< i wrote it in that paragraph...I guess it wasnt enough, im sorry! And I'm also sorry for ...

It's good. Keep them coming. Just a few reminders; You get repetive with your word choice a little too often. And, I'm not certain I understand the....fascination with Kiki's breasts. ...

I like it! Everyone else beat me to all the corrections and things. Keep it up hun! =D