Kikaharu

I love the story. it is so dramatic. I love the ending. you should write more to the story like that more people get killed and the killer should be ...

I like the poem it reachs to people. I could image what was going on. I think that it did flow well but not so well in some places. the ...

the people that said babe and honey one is a girl and one is a boy

I mostly write romance with another genre.

Hi, I'm Kikaharu and I love writing and drawing. I want to be an author. I have 117 names of stories and start a few of them. I write about ...

I have 117 names for stories. I started about 10 of the stories. I just love this website. I want to become a writer.

I started this story and have not finished it yet. Tell me what you think about it so far. Thanks The blood spilled into the monster’s mouth. The person cries ...

I loved that story. I write stories like that too and the story is just so heart touching to me. I'm emo/goth so I love that types of stories. Well ...

it doesn't really sound like a poem to me and I didn't like it but that is my opinion. It's doesn't have a flow to it. I think that some ...

I like the feelings behided the poem. It's a poem that gets people really thinking about things. There isn't much that is wrong. I don't know if any of it ...

I like the poem. There are a few spelling mistakes. The flow of the poem is great. The lenght of the poem is fine. I think people will love this ...

My day is gone The waves are long My heart is in love today The life I hear Is not so dear It’s hard to live this way When you’re ...

i like the poem. It is unique and the words are a great match for the poem. There is a feeling that connected to me when I read it. I ...

I think it's ok but needs somethings to change not a lot. I like that it is related to things that happen to everyday people. It's an interesting poem just ...

I like it. It creative of but the story starts out of nowhere. you do have your MC in the beginning but you don't have the conflict in the beginning. ...