Kikaharu

I really like this poem. I like alot of your poems that you do.

I like this poem. I really like the twist at the end that it was just your dad snoring. It rhymed and it flowed so I think that was good. ...

I thought it was a nice poem at first I didn't get the rhythm of the poem but i just think that's cause I haven't read poems in along time.

I'm falling for this guy hoping I can stay grounded even though i can feel myself flying I don't want to fall for him cause what if he doesn't feel ...

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this is a haiku that I had to write for my english class. A haiku is a 3 lines poem the first and last lines have 5 syllables and the ...

Ok, this is my opinion. the poem is ok. it didn't really sound like a poem to me. some of the ways you order words sound very odd. I think ...

thanks june

this story is not a short story I just have added and finish the story. I working on a 25 series book and only got the first 10 pages done. ...

When no one is around You are not alone for there is a bright star that is shown. In the blue the star shines even in the middle of the ...

I like this poem. it has a good flow to it. the message for this poem is a message to share with other people. there isn't much or anything to ...

I love this poem. it is an awesome poem. the message of the poem is a message to spread to the whole world. the flow of the poem is perfect. ...

I like this poem. it is very interesting and I think other people will like this poem too. It's sad and depressing but I like those types of poems. The ...