Kiicoh

Eh. This story was ok. You have some rhyming patterns in this that I don't like. It makes it seem like you attempted writing a poem with this, failed miserably, ...

This is another english assignment. The assignment was to identify our biggest fear, and express it through an "open-format" piece i.e. drawing, photography, essay, poem, etc. Thanks for reading :) ...

Insomniacs reality Night upon night, I lay all alone, Possessed by my thoughts, Unable to let go, I’m haunted from a distance, By what I desire most, Held in discussion ...

Wow. I totally and completely disagree with both of your reviewers so far... Disagreements with your first reviewer: You have some great lines but you ruin it with the constant ...

Wow. I REALLY liked this. Your hand gently ran through my hair, smoothing out my tangled curls. My only thought, to stay still so that your comfort wouldn't stop. My ...

Interesting... I don't really understand it, but I kind of like it. It reminds me of Dr. Sues, which I hope you don't find offensive. :)

I really enjoyed reading this piece! For the most part, it flows very nicely. Cloudy veil recoils the night The fiery stars with gold alight I don't like how your ...

I enjoyed the First Draft the best. As a reader, the biggest thing i peronally look for is word choice. If the words can flow, and sound intelligent, and of ...

and disappear every remainder of itself. I'm really not sure "disappear" is the best word to use in conjunction with the last line, otherwise, I think you need a comma ...

Contrare to what wickedwonder had to say, I think it's great. I LOVE it. The way it's written is... really cool, for lack of a better word. It almost seems ...

(6)With every word you speak. I think you may have miscounted.. Otherwise, it caught my attention; I liked it. I didn't miscount (: (1)with (2)eve(3)ry (4)word (5)you (6)speak Thank you ...

This is a writing piece I did for my english class. The assignment was to create a short story incorporating theme, characterization, conflict, and resolution in 55 words. The warming ...

Personally, I don't like it. The repetition is... odd. I think I'd like it more if there were to be a rhyming theme to it. The poem is, well, bland. ...

In this poem I used a specific pattern of syllables, so to help the reader understand the pattern, I put the number of syllables in each line at the beginning ...

Good job! Again, make sure you're checking your spelling, grammer, punctuation, etc. before you post. I really like what's happening so far. The main character seems too much of a ...