Kiicoh

'Round every corner there's shadows to dance with declined offer chance after chance. Wrapped in my fingers my soul's intertwined among pulsed singers, arteries undined. What of the others with ...

Also, this piece should be rated 16+ or 18+ due to the language.

I did enjoy this piece, but unlike others, I didn't like the use of the F-word. In my eyes, it dulls the piece, and takes away from it's greatness. But ...

Review a couple pieces of mine? Pretty please? :) "Progression" - Poem "Taylor's Treasures" - Short Story Please and thank you so much! xoxo, Kiicoh.

I LOVE this poem. It sees the darkness clouding in that is death, Which reeks of pollution, and its endangered inhabitants. . This doesn't rhyme. It doesn't flow to well, ...

I honestly didn't read your entire piece, because I lost a bit of interest after the rhyming scheme ended, but I loved the first stanza. It made me giggle :3 ...

This reminds me of something that would be in the novel 1984. I like it :). This also kind of reminds me of V for Vendetta. The only thing that ...

Some nights I can still imagine her warm touch on my skin, and her sweet, Alabama accented voice whispering into my ear. She was never afraid to show affection. I ...

I didn't like how you strayed from your first stanza's rhyming pattern, but other than that, I really liked it. Great job! My favorite part was : Play a faithful ...

I thought this was pure beauty. It made me feel so much emotion! Emotion that I've felt before... I could feel the pain; the sorrow. Just... Wow. No critiques. Keep ...

WOW. What an amazing picture this creates! I LOVE this. Not like, LOVE. Oh, the beauty! The artistry... GREAT JOB. This sort of reminded me of a part of Hannibal. ...

Oh. My. God. I think I fell in love with you a little bit... My favorite part: I could write about your eyes, like beacons, piercing the fog with such ...

What happened to your pattern? In the first two stanzas, you kind of had an abab rhyming pattern... Sorta lol. "Lied" and "alike" kind of go together, and "pain" and ...

I am lonely , I dont feel loved . Theres a noise around me , o ften a crowd . I stand in the middle of the masses of people ...

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