Kiicoh

I'm considering this a free-style. I didn't edit anything during, or after I wrote it like I do with my other poetry. I just let it flow out of me. ...

I'm not with everyone else... I don't really like it. It could potentially be a great story, but it's not as "incredible" as everyone else is claiming. My best friend ...

It’s lonely, and harsh; An arctic winter With pins to the face, Eyes full of mace, Pulling splinter by splinter. It’s arousing, and unreal; Testing the law. Seemingly fake, With ...

On the contrare to the previous review, I understand completely. That's me. I'm that girl. I know EXACTLY what's being said in that poem because I live it everyday. Those ...

I really like this! Although I've never dealt with much discrimination for my sexuality, I have friends that have, and it's horrible. Any nit-picks that i could have pointed out ...

I see you've gotten lots of attention for this beautiful piece of work, so I won't bother with little repeated critques. Great job. Your grammar is great, along with your ...

This is ok. Kind of bland, but it's alright. My best friend's town was hit in Alabama. I was hoping for something different out of this. Something more than "thank ...

I REALLY like this. I'm officially following you. This poem is short, sweet, and straight-up. I like that. Great job. :) Keep writing! :) xoxo, Kiicoh.

Reading this really disappointed me. I was expecting something really romantic and well written. This "romantic short story" would have been better sent through text message or IM. Maybe a ...

Hah. I can relate. I like this :) Keep writing :) xoxo, Kiicoh.

I enjoyed reading this. The end kinda hit home ("where the heart is" :P). It's so sad! I think the poem could have flowed better, and I didn't really like ...

This is AMAZING! At first I was like 'Eh, this is alright. it's pretty nice.', but the ending makes the entire poem so strong! It's great. Of course my favorite ...

I LOVE this. Great job! :) My only critique is: Two delicate flowers, floating on the sea , One’s drowned and broken, the other one’s me - Here you had ...

The Entrance aroma- it's never been right- never smelled of home. I'm walking on eggshells avoiding the fight. The stove's element heats, everyday's the same, then the night light glows. ...

From what I've glanced at, the majority thinks it needs fixing of some sort. I like it just the way it is! :) Good job :) I was amused.