KevinL

Well, between the three of you, you all said a lot so I'm not gonna reply to everything. What I will say is that I realize it's kinda a tough ...

I didn't say it didn't matter what the reader thought. I just disagreed, that's all. If I came off as rude, I apologize. First of all, rehab and mental institutions ...

The setting is a mental hospital/rehab. The abrupt tense changes were deliberate. A bust is half of a cigarette. Everything else is just a matter of preference. Thanks for reading. ...

Could you maybe elaborate a little more? lol

Thanks for the critique. I;ll look over my story and see if I need to make those changes. Thanks again.

Although I do not claim to be an expert on bipolar disorder, I do have to admit that I'm bipolar myself and I guess some of my feelings got mixed ...

I'm glad you liked it. The main character suffers from bipolar disorder. In my experience, medication can sometimes feel like your putting a gun to your head. I guess it ...