KevinL

Very good. I could tell that this piece was meant to be quite philosophical and it certainly shows. Even though I'm not sure I got all that was being said ...

It was a very short prologue so I can't really say too much about how the story is. I think it would've been a little more interesting if you had ...

I'm glad you liked it. The main character suffers from bipolar disorder. In my experience, medication can sometimes feel like your putting a gun to your head. I guess it ...

Don't take this the wrong way, but your story was a little bland. The good news is there wasn't anything terribly wrong with the grammar but they way you told ...

Interesting read. I don't know if I exactly "got it" but I definitely enjoyed it. I had to force myself to get past the first paragraph though. I think you ...

Oh, my fault. I didn't realize I needed to review two other pieces first. I'll get right on that! Thanks for reading mine though, anyways.

I'd blow it on some tattoos, ya know? Get some piercings.

Try listening to some Irish music. It might get the creative juices flowing! Go on youtube and look up the Fields of Athenry, Finnegans Wake, and other songs like that.

Hi everyone :D My name's Kevin and I'm a writer. I've been published 4 times but never earned a cent for any one of them. Oh well. Not a big ...

Hospital Mania By Kevin L Last name removed from post for safety reasons The first thing that happened is somebody put a gun to my head. Please stop, I say. ...