KevinL

Well, between the three of you, you all said a lot so I'm not gonna reply to everything. What I will say is that I realize it's kinda a tough ...

Note: I'm thinking of publishing this as a memoir, given that it is based on my own experiences. Should I? THis was also published in a magazine called Cause and ...

I didn't say it didn't matter what the reader thought. I just disagreed, that's all. If I came off as rude, I apologize. First of all, rehab and mental institutions ...

The setting is a mental hospital/rehab. The abrupt tense changes were deliberate. A bust is half of a cigarette. Everything else is just a matter of preference. Thanks for reading. ...

I haven't read part 1 yet, so I can't say I totally understand what's going on but I really like what I'm reading so far. I found the characters dynamic ...

Could you maybe elaborate a little more? lol

I received an email recently that I am set to be published for my piece 'Goodnight Irene' on January 2010 in Conceit magazine. Now I know, via Duotrope, that this ...

Thanks for the critique. I;ll look over my story and see if I need to make those changes. Thanks again.

I was on looking for places to publish pieces, and I stumbled upon this website which, although is not a publication like I originally thought, is still a very good ...

You seem to be very hard on your writing style. I thought it was very well done. Exceedingly well done I might say. You might try publishing it in Teenink ...

Goodnight Irene by Kevin L Irene is going to bed now. Goodnight Irene. Irene took Xanax and now she’s going to sleep forever. The other day she was so spaced ...

This is a nice little, I guess you'd call it, fable. It had a surprise ending and it certainly seemed to show you saying something about the traditional ideas of ...

Although I do not claim to be an expert on bipolar disorder, I do have to admit that I'm bipolar myself and I guess some of my feelings got mixed ...

It's a nice little monologue. It would be even nicer though if you beefed up with a plot and some background. This is something you should work on. You definitely ...

The Girl Who Gazes At Hills By Kevin L Krillia gave a bittersweet sigh as she gazed out at the green hills from atop the stockade. They were rich, rolling ...